short film unit 11 timing and plan

a female seating on a chair watching tv, then an advert pops up in fast pace with ideas about looking better objectifying females, projecting unrealistic images, the camera then looking at her face as the advert is projected onto her face. the image blurres into a different scene of the female waking up in the middle of the street( or a forest-making it more dream like?). as she starts walking down there are only females around her- we see shots of the females objectifying her, the camera moving slowly up her body, then back to the females looking at her, then shots fragmenting of her body,  going back and forth. wakes up in middle of the night in sweat. we see a sequence-montage of her rushing out, buying product. "I thought this would make me happy" cut to end, slow pan of camera moving from floor, going up her body slow as the start,  she is seating on sofa again, her face- dark circles under her eyes, mouth open, reflection of an advert on tv on his face. camera zoom out to her surrounded by products she's bought, while looking at an advert. cut to black screen, doly shot of the girl jumping up in bed, everything is dark. the sound of cash and The End come on the screen as the girl is heavy breathing seating in bed, looking at the camera, 'then why am i not?'

-the dream part is longest
-shoul i keep females 'objectifying' females or males? What is achievable?
-the pressure is coming from all sides(adverts and people)
-have short part of females in different films under the 'male gaze' idea in the 'dream sequence', jump cut, nightmare/flashbacks like?


TIMING
00.00-00.10 -zoom out from extreme close up of females face into the room she is in, clean room, empty
00.10-00.20- pan of camera going up slow on females body
00.20-00.30- close up of her face while advert is projected on
00.30-00.35-the camera moves from her face onto advert in fast pace
00.35-00.59- forth and back between advert and extreme close up of girls eyes
01.00-01.10- blured image, as advert is projected on the girls face, while the previous shot is still jumping back and forth, screen goes to black in a blur
01.10-01.40- slow wake up of girl, her eyes slowly open as the camera zooms out from extreme close up of her eyes then to an establishing shot
01.40-01.50- camera goes in a slow pan, upwards, mid shot, the picture is hazy, as the girl stumbles up
01.50-02.10-whispers of girls, as the girl is walking down an empty street
02.10-03.00- girl is walking down as the camera goes back and forth from different females eyes and faces to girls body going up, segmenting